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Re child of sorrow- a FORCED return to childhood story
Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2015 7:18 am
by derry-boychild
I would LOVE to hear comments?
Firstly is it worth going on?
Secondly should I do separate submissions for more parts
Re: Re child of sorrow- a FORCED return to childhood story
Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2015 8:16 am
by bruce330
It is worth writing more.
Bruce330
Re: Re child of sorrow- a FORCED return to childhood story
Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2015 10:11 am
by mrspankshard
Definitely worth continuing!!!
Re: Re child of sorrow- a FORCED return to childhood story
Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2015 10:33 pm
by derry-boychild
Am I going too far with her child treatment?>
Any other comments?
Re: Re child of sorrow- a FORCED return to childhood story
Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2015 1:41 am
by derry-boychild
Am I going to far?
Any thoughts of comments?
Re: Re child of sorrow- a FORCED return to childhood story
Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2015 2:51 pm
by pantied33m
Enjoying the story so far but notice that norma has aged from 14 in part 2 to 15 in part 4
Re: Re child of sorrow- a FORCED return to childhood story
Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2015 8:10 am
by derry-boychild
have corrected error in Norma's age in part 4
Re: Re child of sorrow- a FORCED return to childhood story
Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2015 5:07 pm
by derry-boychild
Sorry for the slowness, am having some technical difficulties whilst abroad on vacation.
I would still love to hear comments
Re: Re child of sorrow- a FORCED return to childhood story
Posted: Sat Feb 06, 2016 10:21 am
by derry-boychild
Sorry for delay in adding, Still interested in responses
Re: Re child of sorrow- a FORCED return to childhood story
Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2016 9:29 am
by derry-boychild
I hope people are liking the story. I do appreciate responses