tommy the boy in a all girl spanking club

[maxine-a-cd-4-f]

This is the start of a story called the all girl for the story about a 19 year old boy who’s name is Tommy as he finds himself being the only boy that’s in a all girl spanking club that’s in his neighborhood and to follow will be a listing off all the girls who are in the club with him and their ages which is from 18 to 25 years old
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Midge-18 Anne-18 Debbie-18 Linda-18 Paige-18 Ginny-18 Sandy-18, Sue-18 , Erica-18, Chrissy-18 , Nicole-18 , Katrina-18, Lexy-18, Rachel-18, Jenna-18, Kristie-18, Sonya-18, Lora18, Tamara-18, Katy-18 , Susie-18 , Cher-18 , Christina-18, Trish-18, Amber-18, Vicky-18, Tammie-18, Jamie-18, Pamela-18, Valerie-18, Carmen-18, Whitney-18, Julie-18, Margie-18, Betsy-18, Sabrina-18, Gina-18, Crystal-18, Gail-18, Trudy-18, Bonnie-18, Lilly-18 Marjorie-18, Jackie-18, Janey-18, Christi-18, Debra-18, Grace-18 & next are the 19 y/o's
Amber-19 Vicky-19 Annie-19, Jamie-19 Pamela-19, Valerie-19, Wendy-19, Loni-19, Kimberly-19 Amanda-19 Christi-19 Emma-19, Bethany-19 Barbara-19 Melinda-19, Christine-19, Jilly-19, Mandy-19 ,Cindie-19 Kim-19
Marie-19 Robyn-19 Sheila-19 Lexie-19, Ginger-19, Katie-19, Doreen-19, Sarah-19, Carla-19, Sara-19, Bridget-19, Kayley-19, Carol-19, Pattie-19, Darleen-19, Marcia-19, Tiffany-19 ,Angela-19, Johanna-19,Mary-19,
Rhonda-19, Joanne-19 ,Corrie-19 Angie-19, Gloria-19, Laura-19, Leanne-19, Sandra-19, and heres the next age group Brandi-20, Tina-20, Shirley-20 , Michelle-20, Millie-20, Dawn-20, Shellie-20, Mollie-20,
Alexis-20, Alexa-20, Kailey-20, Lauren-20 , Stacy-20, Jennifer-20, Maureen-20, Pam-20, Shelly-20, Jerri-20, Barbie-20, Melissa-20, Kathy-20, Monica-20, Dana-20, Tonya-20, Kathie-20, Shelby-20 Lara-20. Patricia-20, Libby-20, Hannah-20, Beth-20, Sandie-20 Missy-20, Sylvia-20, Paula-20, Grace-20, and next the age group
Penny-21, Sharon-21, Maria-21, Lucy-21, Melanie-21, Cindy-21, Helen-21, Barbara-21, Peggy-21, Tammie-21
Lana-21, Arlene-21, Ashley-21, Amie-21, Marsha-21, Trixie-21, Marcie-21, Amy-21, Tracy-21, Megan-21, Regina-21, Erin-21, Belinda-21, Cathy-21 Jacklyn-21, Morgen-21, Madison-21, Alexis-21, Alexa-21, Laurie-21 now here's all the 22 y/o's..... Vickie-22, Heather-22, Maxine22, Lillie-22, Holly-22, Eve-22, Kailey-22, Chloe-22, Faith-22, Alicia-22, Savannah-22, Karley-22, Susan-22, Lisa-22, Patsy-22, Shannon-22, Hollie-22, Brenda-22, Abby-22, Amelia-22, Chelsea-22, Deana-22, Jasmine-22, Lindsey-22, Connie-22, Lauren-22, Misty-22, Pattie-22, Melodie-22, Janet-22, and here are all of the 23 y/o's Cheri-23, Cassie-23, Olivia-23, Joyce-23, Regina-23, Sherry--23, Janice-23, Becky-23, Natalie-23, Reba-23, Jilly-23, Sabrina-23, Jill-23, Nikki-23, Diane-23, Nancy-23, Sally-23, Veronica-23, Leigh-23, Maggie-23, Johanna-23, Luci-23, Kylie-23, Lacey-23 now here are all of the 24' y/olds.......Bess-24, Marion-24, Sherry-24, Kellie-24, Patricia-24, Danielle-24, Alice-24, Lynn-24, Beckie-24, Donna-24, Tammy-24, Kristen-24, Betty-24, Jenny-24, Carrie-24, Jessica-24, Claire-24, Diana-24, and last the oldest girls in the club...........Daphene-25, Annette-25, Jennie-25, Molly-25, Heidi-25, Louise-25, Mindy-25, Camille-25, Kay-25, Lori-25, Ellen-25, Hope-25, Eva-25 Denise-25, Karen-25, Jean-25, Samantha-25, Casandra-25, Kelly-25
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This story starts on a late boring Monday afternoon when one of my really good friends named Eve came to the door while I was watching a new spanking video that is called “a hairbrush spanking for a bratty daughter” and after they all was in the house and had saw the video that I was watching Heather said with a grin oh wow I’ve seen this video and it’s good as several of the girls say that the naughty girl gets a doozy of a spanking as Eve asking me if I remember that really huge house that sat on the edge of town I now tell Eve that I know the house she’s talking about I then am told that a lady by the name of Joan plus 11 of her friends had bought the house and she has heard of our spanking group and wants to meet us this evening I said that we all need to go get our spanking implements plus a tote bag to carry them all in and they said we have them with us as they point to a tote bag they’re carrying and as I was talking we all saw that Shirley was squirming plus wriggling on my bed like she couldn’t sit still as my step sis Ginny stroked her hair while asking are you having trouble sitting still honey as we heard Shirley whimper as she said uh huh and it’s hurting so much because Tommy had taken a paddle to me lastnight and wore my butt and thighs out with it but good as I kissed her I said that I know your sore but I also know you enjoyed what followed honey as we saw Shirley grinning.

As she said oh yes having you hold me until I calmed down then your eating my pussy making me cum several times then getting fucked front and back was worth the sound paddling that you gave me plus your cuddling me on your lap after being fucked so I’m sore but happy Ginny’s now cuddling Shirley she asked me so who all have you fucked after giving them a hard non punishment spanking I said with a grin a most of them have slept with me after being spanked and now to my surprise Ginny said that she’s wishing she was in Shirley’s shoes lastnight because as of late she’s been so horny. as Eve now asked me so did she suck your cock after you had spanked her I now grinned as I said yep I now reached out to my lil step sis as I said that I’ll soon do the same for her that I’ve done with Shirley as I said that I saw Ginny’s eyes light up.

And after getting the canvas bag that we keep our spanking implements that me and Ginny use to give a spanking with and as we all walked the few miles till we got to that house on the edge of town and that in about ten minutes all of the girls had arrived and that it was a lil after six in the evening when we knocked at the door and as she answered the door we saw that Joan was a lady who we later learned was 40 years old and as we was told to come in we all saw plus met the other ladies who would be sharing this house and we all was told their names and their ages are as follows Wanda-45, Anna-38, Joan-40, Robin-37, Beth-39, Martha-35, Dee-45, Beverly-46, Doris-41 Lorrie-42, Jane-39 Ruth-44 and as we all sat down as Joan then asked us why we formed a spanking club and why was Tommy the only male in the club? Eve said the reason for the club was that nobody thinks that a adult needed any sort of discipline and that all of our parents quit spanking us long ago and when we all moved out on our own and that after the wreck that took the life of Tommy and Ginny’s parents they had sat down and realised that we all felt the same we all then got together and began giving each other the discipline that we knew that we was needing.

As Wanda asked so who’s house did you all get a spanking at Wanda’s told that most of the hard spankings was given at Tommy’s house and as Joan’s now asking us if they will let them all be a mommy figure punish us when we are bad and at hearing that we all said gladly cause we’ve felt that we needed a few mommy’s to help out with the strict spankings as Ruth’s asking if we mix sex with our spankings I grinned as I said uh huh cause we not only spank as punishment but also as a stress release that a good spanking produces and as for another reason why I’m the only boy in the club it’s cause none of the other guy’s that are our age know of the club nor do they have any idea how fun it is to be fucking a pretty girl when either of you have a hot well spanked bottoms and or thighs. As Ruth then asked us if we like to spanked until we cry? Eve then said yes plus when we’re spanking each other we know they wont stop just cause we begin to cry plus when we are either stressed or have been very bad it does us a lot of good plus it's a good stress buster to be able to let go and just cry like a baby while the hard spanking continuing to go on nonstop cause the spanker will continue until the spanker thinks that they’ve had enough plus learned a lesson if they’ve been bad and feels that was how it’s called for in the role play and is at least a really hot cherry-red and of course quite a few of us have been spanked until we have a beet red butt as Doris asked if we give comfort after a spanking I said yes that something we all agreed needs to be given with both a role play/stress release spankings plus all of the punishment spankings.

June’s now then asking if we enjoy role playing? I answered that we all like role playing as Eve then said that we have even totally dressed Tommy plus made him up as a girl while treating him like a sis or a g/f before one of us spanks ”her”. As Beth’s asking so when you have Tommy all dressed plus made up as a girl do you have a girls name you like to have him answer to Eve said we have her answering to Tanya and now Robin asked so if your spanking each other as role play do you always mix sex with spanking and how long are your role plays Carrie now said that they can be any where from a couple of hours to a whole day and no sex is not always in the scenes cause we also do nonsexual role plays with older sis and so on and when one of us spanks Tommy he is ours to play with for as long as the scene lasts and Wanda then asked if we have ever had a enema’s with punishment or role playing as Ginny then said that we’ve all had a really soapy enema after getting spanked. And we all hate it but even though while we dread getting a hot soapy punishment enema but we know it’s a good added punishment and yes have used a enema plus having our mouths washed out with soap for sass, swearing, talking back, or lying with a punishment plus in a role playing scene if called for as Dee’s then asking if we have a favorite thing to be spanked with?

Laura said that it really does not matter we don't care we all have been spanked with belts paddles, straps, the bare hand, a big heavy wooden spoon a old fashioned wooden hairbrush, a tawse, a switch. And as I had then went over to where Shirley’s squirming and sitting gingerly on the chair I then went and asked Joan if she has a pair of thick pillows for Shirley to sit on Joan said sure as she told Wanda to go and fetch a pair pillows from the hall closet and as she's bringing the pillows to Shirley I then said to Joan that in a minute I’ll have her treating me like she would her own 19 year old son who she suspects has been shoplifting as I said that she looked at me then asked me if is this a role play scene I blushed deeper as I said no cause I’ve done a lot of shoplifting plus getting away with it Joan looked at me as she said shame on you as she tells me that if her son had did what you’ve been doing I would spank him soundly right before bed. As I now told Shirley to show everybody how red your butt is and when she pulls up her skirt and shows everybody her beet red bottom as she then said that Tommy had first had her lay across his lap after sitting on a tall armless chair and once he had pinned my hands Tommy had then taken a paddle and had went to work on my bottom plus my thighs with it which soon had me howling screaming plus begging and pleading along with kicking my legs plus squirming along with wriggling like mad on his lap and twenty minutes later he had stopped and I was crying like a lil baby as I did a really frantic war dance all around the room while had been trying to rub away that awful fire which I was not able to get rid off till after he calmed me down and had used chilled cold cream to soothe my very hot scorched butt plus my thighs and then after borrowing some of Ginny’s cream cleanser to wash my messy face before taking me to his room to make me feel so much better as Beverly now asked why was Shirley spanked? I tell her that it was just to relive a lot of stress as she then asked so was you doing a role play scene if so did you get stuck in a corner and as Shirley’s rubbing her butt and thighs she said yes to both questions Anna came and cuddled Shirley then asked what kind of role was you playing we saw Shirley blushing as she said that she played the role of a spoiled rotten g/f who treats her b/f like hell till he’s had enough of it so I egged him on all afternoon then about 8 or so in the evening while Ginny was with other girls in the club Tommy had put his foot down after my having dared him to do something about all of my awful bratting that I had done that afternoon.

Ands as she’s squirming plus wriggling on the pillows that’s in the chair she said oh he did something about my having been a awful brat alright. I reached over and cuddled then kissed her as I said that you had been acting like a spoiled brat but after I had you calmed down I know you had loved what all happened after taking you to my room as Joan now said so what happened when you two had got into his room Shirley said with a grin he made love to me and it had felt so good Joan smiled as she said that having hot steamy sex always helps a well spanked young lady feel better as she now saw that it’s a lil after 8 pm as she asked me if I’ve got a pair of Pajama’s blushing I said no Joan said that she might have a old pair of her son’s pj’s for you to wear as she went and looked in her stuff and a few minutes later she returned and had handed me a pair of pajama pants as she tells me to go in the bathroom and put them on as then a few minutes later I come back in to the room with the clothes that I had on in my hands Joan said for Martha to place Tommy’s clothes in the room he’ll sleep in after being spanked as Joan now looked and said good they fit as I’m now told to stand in a corner to think about what I did wrong and as I went to a corner and stood there with my hands on my head. “To be continued” (if anybody wants it to be)

[wendover]

What a load of rubbish

[wendover]

What a twat

[wendover]

You all load of rubbish

[kimosabi]

Cut the author some slack. I don't think English is their first language, and it was a decent first effort considering. A few constructive suggestions:

1: Try finishing your idea and fully describing it before moving on to the next one, and when you ARE done with the idea, clearly separate it with a new sentence or paragraph.

2: Use spell-check and grammar-check. Even i you are in a non english speaking country, there are online grammar and spell checkers available.

3: Don't try to fit so much information in all at once: the audience starts to get information overload and gloss over, especially when the grammar is not perfect. Just pick something smaller in scope, and fully explore that.

4: Don't get discouraged because of one commenter.

[sexylegsmale]

I kind of got bored after reading

Midge-18 Anne-18 Debbie-18 Linda-18 Paige-18 Ginny-18 Sandy-18, Sue-18 , Erica-18, Chrissy-18 , Nicole-18 , Katrina-18, Lexy-18, Rachel-18, Jenna-18, Kristie-18, Sonya-18, Lora18, Tamara-18, Katy-18 , Susie-18 , Cher-18 , Christina-18, Trish-18, Amber-18, Vicky-18, Tammie-18, Jamie-18, Pamela-18, Valerie-18, Carmen-18, Whitney-18, Julie-18, Margie-18, Betsy-18, Sabrina-18, Gina-18, Crystal-18, Gail-18, Trudy-18, Bonnie-18, Lilly-18 Marjorie-18, Jackie-18, Janey-18, Christi-18, Debra-18, Grace-18 & next are the 19 y/o's
Amber-19 Vicky-19 Annie-19, Jamie-19 Pamela-19, Valerie-19, Wendy-19, Loni-19, Kimberly-19 Amanda-19 Christi-19 Emma-19, Bethany-19 Barbara-19 Melinda-19, Christine-19, Jilly-19, Mandy-19 ,Cindie-19 Kim-19
Marie-19 Robyn-19 Sheila-19 Lexie-19, Ginger-19, Katie-19, Doreen-19, Sarah-19, Carla-19, Sara-19, Bridget-19, Kayley-19, Carol-19, Pattie-19, Darleen-19, Marcia-19, Tiffany-19 ,Angela-19, Johanna-19,Mary-19,
Rhonda-19, Joanne-19 ,Corrie-19 Angie-19, Gloria-19, Laura-19, Leanne-19, Sandra-19, and heres the next age group Brandi-20, Tina-20, Shirley-20 , Michelle-20, Millie-20, Dawn-20, Shellie-20, Mollie-20,
Alexis-20, Alexa-20, Kailey-20, Lauren-20 , Stacy-20, Jennifer-20, Maureen-20, Pam-20, Shelly-20, Jerri-20, Barbie-20, Melissa-20, Kathy-20, Monica-20, Dana-20, Tonya-20, Kathie-20, Shelby-20 Lara-20. Patricia-20, Libby-20, Hannah-20, Beth-20, Sandie-20 Missy-20, Sylvia-20, Paula-20, Grace-20, and next the age group
Penny-21, Sharon-21, Maria-21, Lucy-21, Melanie-21, Cindy-21, Helen-21, Barbara-21, Peggy-21, Tammie-21
Lana-21, Arlene-21, Ashley-21, Amie-21, Marsha-21, Trixie-21, Marcie-21, Amy-21, Tracy-21, Megan-21, Regina-21, Erin-21, Belinda-21, Cathy-21 Jacklyn-21, Morgen-21, Madison-21, Alexis-21, Alexa-21, Laurie-21 now here's all the 22 y/o's..... Vickie-22, Heather-22, Maxine22, Lillie-22, Holly-22, Eve-22, Kailey-22, Chloe-22, Faith-22, Alicia-22, Savannah-22, Karley-22, Susan-22, Lisa-22, Patsy-22, Shannon-22, Hollie-22, Brenda-22, Abby-22, Amelia-22, Chelsea-22, Deana-22, Jasmine-22, Lindsey-22, Connie-22, Lauren-22, Misty-22, Pattie-22, Melodie-22, Janet-22, and here are all of the 23 y/o's Cheri-23, Cassie-23, Olivia-23, Joyce-23, Regina-23, Sherry--23, Janice-23, Becky-23, Natalie-23, Reba-23, Jilly-23, Sabrina-23, Jill-23, Nikki-23, Diane-23, Nancy-23, Sally-23, Veronica-23, Leigh-23, Maggie-23, Johanna-23, Luci-23, Kylie-23, Lacey-23 now here are all of the 24' y/olds.......Bess-24, Marion-24, Sherry-24, Kellie-24, Patricia-24, Danielle-24, Alice-24, Lynn-24, Beckie-24, Donna-24, Tammy-24, Kristen-24, Betty-24, Jenny-24, Carrie-24, Jessica-24, Claire-24, Diana-24, and last the oldest girls in the club...........Daphene-25, Annette-25, Jennie-25, Molly-25, Heidi-25, Louise-25, Mindy-25, Camille-25, Kay-25, Lori-25, Ellen-25, Hope-25, Eva-25 Denise-25, Karen-25, Jean-25, Samantha-25, Casandra-25, Kelly-25

[osmado]

good start but you need to continue the story - it's all set up for some great situations.Carry on.

[klara]

What an appalling story and style.

[maxine-a-cd-4-f]

since only one person has had a postive post there will be no more stories from me and i will get Sean to remove this story

[kyrel]

Maxine. Your story idea might be good, but your pretty much total lack of punctuation, comma's etc. makes it exceedingly hard and difficult to read and understand, and it seriously hurts the story. I tried reading through some of it, but frankly I'm too tired at the moment to be able to make sense of it without punctuation.

Kimosabi offers some good pointers. Pls. read them, take them under considderation, and then try and work over your story again. Writing's an artform. There's a reason we have to write essayes during school, because only a few people are natural writers. The rest of us need to train our writing skills, just the same as any other skill.

Don't be discouraged by the harsh comments. If first you fail, try, then try again. You might fail any number of times in a row, but with every failure you should be "failing better", if you understand what I mean.