I was a bad girl

[spoiledbrat2011]

I was a very bad girl my boyfriend jackson told me to eat over and over again i told him no, and he told me that i was asking for a majorly sore bottom, so he told me to eat again and i said no and he told me if i didnt eat he would spank my bare bottom, so he told me once again to eat and once again i said no, so he told me to bare my bottom and stand in the corner and wait on him, he came back in with a wooden spoon and wooden hair brush and had his belt, he sat on the bed and told me to come to him and he told me why he was about to spank me because i disobeyed him and refused to eat and then he takes me over his knee and spanks my bare bottom with his hand and i am crying and begging, jackson please stop it hurts waaaaaaaaaaaaah, he stops briefly and picks up the wooden spoon and spanks my butt and i am crying even harder waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah jackson please no more and wack wack goes the spoon on my butt waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, he says i am not going to stop until you have a proper spanking, then he picks up the hairbrush and spanks me wack wack wack waaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh jackson please not more, then he puts some pillows on the bed and tells me to lay on them and spread my legs and he looks at my pussy cause it is now on show and he picks up the belt and gives me 10 good swats on my butt , 1 wack, 2 wack waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, 3 wack, waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, 4 wack, waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, 5 wack, waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, 6 wack waaaaaaaaaaaaah, 7 wack waahhhhhhhhhh, 8 wack waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, 9 waaaaaaaaaaaaah, 10 wack waaaaaaaaaaaaah, he tells me cause i am brat he is going to paddle my butt, 1 wack waahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, 2 wack waaaaaaaaaaaaaah, 3 wack wahhhhhhhhhhhh, 4 wack waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, 5 wack , waaaaaaaaaaaaah, 6 wack waaaaaaaaaaaah, 7 wack, 8 wack , 9 wack, 10 wack waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, 11 wack waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, 12 wack waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, 13 wack waaahhhhhhhhhh, 14 wack waaaaaaaaaaaaaah, 15 wack waaaaaaaaaaaaan, 16 wack waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah,17 wack, 18 wack waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, 19 wack wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, 20 wack, he lets me up makes me stand in the corner.

[f-needsit]

wouldn't be bad, but SERIOUSLY needs some punctuation, or at least some sense of when one sentence ends and another begins.

[wildgrl90]

This has got to be a record for the longest single-sentence post yet.
At least the idea was good. See... this is why daddy was mad when you skipped English class.