Smoking

[SpankOhio]

I could not figure out how to post a topic rather than a story... Even though I have done it in the past....

Anyways.. Some of you have a great mind for a good story.. I have a storyline, I am dying to read about.. and would absolutely love it if someone wrote about it...

I am not a smoker but for some reason I love to read about people being spanked for it...

I would like one of two stories to read about (or both)

One would be a f/f story, two females roommates possibly, when one comes home from long days of work she finds the other has been out of work and not doing anything to get a new job... The hard working female has been paying for all the bills while the other is supposed to look for work. She even gives her an "allowance" for food and such. One day she comes home to find an ashtray, and the apartment smelling of stale ciggarette smoke. Instead of saying anything right away, she wants to wait to catch her. In the meantime she is so pissed off because she has givenher money for food, and yet she spends it on smoking... she goes online to read what to do and finds spanking sites... The next day she comes home early to catch her smoking on the couch, with a glass of wine... Lucky for the hard working roommate she went to the adult toy store, bought a paddle and another implement (you choose) as well as a little maid outfit for her lazy roommate. She storms in, lets her know how angry she is she is wasting the money and smoking, etc etc etc... she then forces her to put the out fit on, of course she will refuse initially, but then she realizes its do as told or leave the apartment and find a new home... She will then be forced to clean the entire apartment, while ironically the good roommate dazzles in the ciggarettes enjoying them more then she ever thought she could. After the cleaning is done, it still isnt enough, she then will give the most intense first spanking someone coudl ever give... All while still smoking the ciggarettes... The story can involve making the bad roommate do sexual things to the good roommate, or they do not have to... I know i laid a lot down, but some of you could really write a very good story here....

The other would be a m/f story. where the woman is a house wife, the man thought she quit smoking very long ago.. When she cooks his spaghetti dinner and he finds an ash in the sauce... he realizes it is time for a severe punishment.. not only is she smoking again, but his dinner is now ruined as well...

Please, if someone could write a detailed enhanced story of at least one of these... I know I would not be the only one to enjoy it...