Re Cat's real motther
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Re Cat's real motther
I was pleased to see over 10 000 hits.
I am wondering about Mommy making Katie accept babyhood and letting her grow up (with the hairbrush always available and her knowing that diapers could return)
What do people think?
I would also be grateful for more comments on the story generally
I am wondering about Mommy making Katie accept babyhood and letting her grow up (with the hairbrush always available and her knowing that diapers could return)
What do people think?
I would also be grateful for more comments on the story generally
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Hello Roberta !!
We were all waiting for the continuation of the story, I found a very quick end. So I felt guilty for giving you rush to continue reading this story.
Whatever you do and decide what you decide, it will be great to continue to enjoy your writing. In particular this plot you're proposing, it seems very interesting.
I am sure that there are thousands, who were looking forward to the continuation. You're an idol of the masses ^ _ ^
We await your return eagerly content
We were all waiting for the continuation of the story, I found a very quick end. So I felt guilty for giving you rush to continue reading this story.
Whatever you do and decide what you decide, it will be great to continue to enjoy your writing. In particular this plot you're proposing, it seems very interesting.
I am sure that there are thousands, who were looking forward to the continuation. You're an idol of the masses ^ _ ^
We await your return eagerly content

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Although people do not write undoubtedly read your stories and following with great interest.
They miss your creations, because your style is unique in the stories that populate this forum ...
go ahead and write when you feel like it: D
They miss your creations, because your style is unique in the stories that populate this forum ...
go ahead and write when you feel like it: D
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Is this ok, do people want me to go on?
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Is this ok, do people want me to go on?
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Good evening. I am convinced that I speak for many when I say that this story is one of the best in the web, because there is little stories with these themes, or with your narrative so good.
Here people read but even 1% postea comments. Your account had more than 10,000 hits and just are 10 comments. I imagine that will be uncomfortable supporting a fictional account or do not want to be related to something. Who knows.
The story is great and deserves a sequel. As I said before, better to wait months for the story is well written, is long and delve into the lives of the characters, their routines, their daily life, etc. Not the typical story of 8 lines to knock you senseless poor character that has 0% interest.
Do not be afraid to repeat yourself, because it is precisely one of the problems that drag this kind of stories that the authors, they get out of hand to be innovative when it is more practical to create consistent routines of punishment as it were, deepen the characters and tell in a way that readers can draw their own conclusions.
The characters in your story, have a lot to develop and that's the interesting thing. The relationship of these characters including humiliation, punishment and tells how the main character, is very attractive.
This website can help a little to develop some idea or inspiration something.
http://spankingtoons.tumblr.com/archive
You probably already know, if not, I recommend checking out.
We will be watching your work, kiss and good luck !! : D
Here people read but even 1% postea comments. Your account had more than 10,000 hits and just are 10 comments. I imagine that will be uncomfortable supporting a fictional account or do not want to be related to something. Who knows.
The story is great and deserves a sequel. As I said before, better to wait months for the story is well written, is long and delve into the lives of the characters, their routines, their daily life, etc. Not the typical story of 8 lines to knock you senseless poor character that has 0% interest.
Do not be afraid to repeat yourself, because it is precisely one of the problems that drag this kind of stories that the authors, they get out of hand to be innovative when it is more practical to create consistent routines of punishment as it were, deepen the characters and tell in a way that readers can draw their own conclusions.
The characters in your story, have a lot to develop and that's the interesting thing. The relationship of these characters including humiliation, punishment and tells how the main character, is very attractive.
This website can help a little to develop some idea or inspiration something.
http://spankingtoons.tumblr.com/archive
You probably already know, if not, I recommend checking out.
We will be watching your work, kiss and good luck !! : D
Re: Re Cat's real motther
Please do continue, i like the start of this.
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Further comments welcome, if possible here rather than in the story
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