Re child of sorrow- a FORCED return to childhood story

derry-boychild · Post by **derry-boychild** » Tue Sep 01, 2015 7:18 am

I would LOVE to hear comments?

Firstly is it worth going on?

Secondly should I do separate submissions for more parts

bruce330 · Post by **bruce330** » Tue Sep 01, 2015 8:16 am

It is worth writing more.
Bruce330

mrspankshard · Post by **mrspankshard** » Tue Sep 01, 2015 10:11 am

Definitely worth continuing!!!

derry-boychild · Post by **derry-boychild** » Sun Sep 06, 2015 10:33 pm

Am I going too far with her child treatment?>

Any other comments?

derry-boychild · Post by **derry-boychild** » Sun Sep 27, 2015 1:41 am

Am I going to far?

Any thoughts of comments?

pantied33m · Post by **pantied33m** » Sun Sep 27, 2015 2:51 pm

Enjoying the story so far but notice that norma has aged from 14 in part 2 to 15 in part 4

derry-boychild · Post by **derry-boychild** » Mon Sep 28, 2015 8:10 am

have corrected error in Norma's age in part 4

derry-boychild · Post by **derry-boychild** » Mon Oct 26, 2015 5:07 pm

Sorry for the slowness, am having some technical difficulties whilst abroad on vacation.

I would still love to hear comments

derry-boychild · Post by **derry-boychild** » Sat Feb 06, 2016 10:21 am

Sorry for delay in adding, Still interested in responses

derry-boychild · Post by **derry-boychild** » Sun Jul 10, 2016 9:29 am

I hope people are liking the story. I do appreciate responses