Cut the author some slack. I don't think English is their first language, and it was a decent first effort considering. A few constructive suggestions: 1: Try finishing your idea and fully describing it before moving on to the next one, and when you ARE done with the idea, clearly separate it with a...

I really enjoyed reading the ones that were there. Have you written the 5th one, and if so where i it?, because I can't wait to read that one as well.