not bad. not bad at all.I had no problem visualizing every aspect of your story. realistic. dramatic. I like it.

AWESOME!!!!!! Please continue this arc!

very nice James!

THE LUCAS FAMILY CHRISTMAS REUNION Mf/mmf Lisa Lucas looked across the banquet hall at her young cousins laughing and playing and gave a sigh. At the tender age of eighteen she remembered just eight short years ago she herself played with her cousins during the Christmas family reunion. But now all ...

Kind of reminded me of that Tales from the Darkside episode The Grither.

THE LUCAS FAMILY REUNION Lisa Lucas looked across the banquet hall at her young cousins laughing and playing and gave a sigh. At the tender age of eighteen she remembered just eight short years ago she herself played with her cousins during the Christmas family reunion. But now all the cousins her a...

Anymore Howard and Gena stories?

Wow enjoying these!

Wow old friend! That was the best story you have ever written! Not only was that a awesome take on a well know classic. But as a gamer who knows the RPG styles I thought your creation of a world like that was amazing. You have cited gurps but the whole idea and feeling was more Deadlands I thought. ...

An overuse of the word Whilst. But not bad.