There are some nice descriptions here, I think they added a lot to the scene.

Thank you!

Feedback is always appreciated

She hated his Mother and her nightmare visits. Her constant criticism she took in silence and groaned inwardly at the snide remarks; but most hurtful of all was he never defended her. No, he just smiled and nodded – it was so unfair! It was only a matter of time before she snapped, and when she did ...

I scribbled most of this down on the train home, it was so vivid, I wanted to capture as much as I could: Her invitation was as unexpected as it was irresistible and I found myself lunching in Sarastro’s in Covent Garden. Let me tell you; the food isn’t brilliant but it’s a flamboyant place, part op...

Read as promised. Interesting article, makes Catholicism seem gentle by comparison

'This is so embarrassing,' said Cathy, as I returned with my coffee. It came from the vending machine downstairs and tasted like lorry tyres, but it was the excuse I needed to leave her alone. The camera shutter clicked for the tenth time. 'And being supervised by that..... thing..... makes it worse...