Great story: good characterisation and some interesting twists and turns. I'm looking forward to reading the other parts.

Nice story. is it the start of something longer?

This is well written, I look forward to part 2...

He stands before me, laughing. I am powerless before his might. My arms and legs are pinned by his spell; I can barely move. I made a deal with the devil. The easiest deal of all. Drums beat, candles burn Angels tease, demons yearn Whips crack, bottoms burn Humans deal, never learn It had seemed a r...