I have to say how flattered I am (and a bit taken aback) for having this story dedicated to me. :) Thank you! It's yet another fantastically well-written read from MisterM and, as often123 has already said, has such a wonderful build up and woven structure with the two plots colliding softly togethe...

MisterM, to use an American metaphor with all of it's double entendre-ish innuendo... I'd say you hit a home run with this. In particular, the way you got inside Helen's head and were able to so descriptively articulate the slow build up ~ to that moment where a line is crossed ~ the tipping point b...

Wonderful, MisterM! This was really hot ~ a very welcome and keenly distracting interruption to my work this afternoon...

Beautifully wordsmithed, DrMarkham! The butterflies that I got in my own belly reading this thought they were part of some kind of feral butterfly circus rodeo in the eye of a tornado. I love the way you built up the tension and excitement, and how you so fluidly presented each character's feelings ...

Yay, I'm finally caught up! Missie, this just keeps getting better and better. i am on the edge of my seat!

that's still really hot even without the sex scenes nice job, missie!

awesome, girl!! I'm not getting any work done today reading your work. Chapter 4 is going to be taunting me all day.

i'm FINALLY getting a chance to read part 2. So far, I am hooked and can't wait to read part 3! Really wonderfully well-written!

Nicely done, Goodgulf. I enjoyed that. It's short, but I like the way you built it up. I kept thinking you would introduce another character to actually spank her, but then it's slowly revealed that she's going to discipline herself, it made me have to rethink the beginning. nice. :) ~ fc x btw, i'm...