This was very passionate and intense. No doubt you will get your wish for more, most especially if you use some of the language with her that you have written here.

If it were two females, I'd be in paradise. Still, do continue on. There is something irresistibly sexy about the vampire's cool confidence. So he wants her magic, does he.....hmmmm. Better I suppose than something as pedestrian as her blood.

Well James, yes, it looks like you should have. I often wonder if my ex lovers ever figured it out after they lost me. If only there wasn't such a stigma attached to it we'd not have so much difficulty talking about it openly and telling our partners what we need, and why. I hope your next lady shar...

The original, and as many will argue BEST implement. Women can most certainly deliver an epic spanking with their hand. You do not need a large hand, you just need to know exactly where and how to apply it to greatest effect. A very engaging read, Goodgulf.

Thank you Jack! It is good to know that you found it an enjoyable read.

badgirl87 wrote:Great Story!!!! Please write another!!!

Glad to hear that you enjoyed it. As soon as I can lay claim to sufficient time to do so, I certainly will write another.

darkkaren wrote:Brilliant story loved the erotic tension very well written

Thank you Karen. I am delighted that you found it enjoyable.

lex46 wrote:Well done, an excellently written piece capturing the tensions and emotions perfectly.

Thank you, lex46. I do try.

Often123 wrote:Marvelous story, full of emotions, passions, and two women into their respective roles

Thank you for the kind and generous words. I wrote a few series several years ago that you might also enjoy. If you wish, you can check them out in the posted links area.

moni2 wrote:Thank you for a wonderfully erotic story. You pushed all my buttons.

I am so pleased that you enjoyed it. If you have the time and the inclination, you should check out my older stories. I posted the links where Sean allowed them.