Search found 6 matches
- Sat Nov 29, 2014 7:44 pm
- Forum: New Spanking Stories
- Topic: Dirty Dishes
- Replies: 6
- Views: 8694
Re: Dirty Dishes
Very well written story and a template for writers of spanking stories. Establish the reason for the spanking. Share the spanking/aftermath. And end the story. Kudos!
- Sat Feb 01, 2014 10:28 pm
- Forum: New Spanking Stories
- Topic: Cindy's day in court
- Replies: 1
- Views: 4502
Re: Cindy's day in court
Well, I see a little lady was raped today. I hope that you keep stories such as this to yourself.
- Mon Jan 06, 2014 1:14 pm
- Forum: New Spanking Stories
- Topic: The Blushing Prima Donna - a true story
- Replies: 2
- Views: 4999
Re: The Blushing Prima Donna - a true story
A screenwriter learns early on that a scene is best when you enter into it at the last possible moment and let an educated audience presume what came before. While your true life tale centers on a play rather than a film, it would have benefited if you had left much of the back-story out. A strong b...
- Fri Dec 06, 2013 6:49 pm
- Forum: New Spanking Stories
- Topic: Spanked by Daddy m/f
- Replies: 1
- Views: 6038
Re: Spanked by Daddy m/f
Enjoyed your story. Well-done.
- Fri Dec 06, 2013 6:47 pm
- Forum: New Spanking Stories
- Topic: The Exchange Student
- Replies: 9
- Views: 17718
Re: The Exchange Student
Another good writer. A very good spanking story.
Establish your premise. Say what you want to say. And end your story.
A simple, successful recipe for an excellent spanking story.
Establish your premise. Say what you want to say. And end your story.
A simple, successful recipe for an excellent spanking story.
- Fri Dec 06, 2013 6:31 pm
- Forum: New Spanking Stories
- Topic: First spankings at 14 F/ffff F/ff
- Replies: 2
- Views: 10927
Re: First spankings at 14 F/ffff F/ff
One of the best stories this site has seen in a long time. Well-written, properly paced, manageable paragraphs and believable. Reminds me of a longer version of the great spanking stories that once were published in Original Letters magazine about parental discipline. Haven't seen that magazine in y...