Disappointed to see this gone (at least temporarily); had seen the "Street Stories" on another forum/storyboard years ago, and have been looking for them for a while. I would agree that you've probably been pranked, or threatened by someone who doesn't know - as I recall, the story was obv...

A very basic story, maybe a little cheesy, but mostly sets up an entertaining pretext for the "good part." And there's nothing wrong with that.

An enjoyable, quick read, I look forward to reading more.

Of course I care to hear more - sounds like Janet not only got her comeuppance, but something she didn't even realize that she really needed. I'm sure Donna only has to express some contrition at being one of the topless girls to get what she wants - and Janet will surely have a return trip to Melis...

Very enjoyable story - loved the tone, the flow, the stream-of-consciousness. Sad to see this is your only effort here thus far - hopefully we're giving you enough encouragement to share more.