This was so beautiful and very intense. I was glad he let you off with only 1/3 of the 100 strokes, but surprised that you were getting yourself in more trouble by the very act of cutting yourself a switch for this whipping! Alyssa certainly seems to want to be spanked, even though she does not seem...

The sensitivity and caring in this part is really moving. I really wonder since she had such difficulty with the hand spanking how she would be able to take the switch at all and how he did not find it necessary to tell her she had redeemed herself by taking responsibility for what she had done and ...

This is awesome! The switch is exactly what I was hoping for, but I agree with the previous post that 100 strokes is very extreme (if they are hard strokes) on an inexperienced bare bottom. Hand spanking for a "warm up" is a good strategy, since a more severe spanking/whipping is less pain...

This is really beautiful! You have developed the character of Alyssa extremely well... (I imagine that she is you). I can almost see you staring at the mirror and talking to yourself as you wrestle nervously with your thoughts!

that was quite a spanking! I wish he had given her a hug before bed but I guess the punishment isn't over yet...

you write very well! I can't wait to read what happens next!

I really enjoyed this story on many levels! It was exciting how Susan stumbles upon the scene of a M/f bare bottom caning and that the spankee was a young woman with whom she had been having some trouble. I enjoyed Susan's arousal (I became aroused too!) And I was glad she decided to give some of th...

OMG THIS IS HOT!!! I don't think I enjoyed it quite as much as Veronica did--I realize she is a fictional character, but even so, she is someone I would enjoy pleasing! (better if she was closer to my age, but as long as she's over 18 it would be very OK)

I really enjoyed reading this story! It took me back to memories of the excitement of beginning a new relationship with a partner who has strong sexual enjoyment of spanking as I have always had.

WOW, you write very well! The scene was brilliantly conceived and put together, and the personalities and feelings of those people are realistic and very believable. I certainly felt like I was right there watching it all as it was happening. Thanks for sharing your story with us!